running away from the wreckage
25Aug08
The young girl peered around her, eyes darting from the several chunks of aircraft, to the sea of bodies left unattended lying among the wreckage. She started west, away from the mound of debris, into the wide expanse of the unknown. It was a place she called home.
Twila glanced at the open space ahead, her mind twisted into a web of tangled thoughts. She was staring into the face of a catch-22. She couldn’t go back there and pick up the pieces of what was left of her, but she couldn’t run away either. Whichever decision she made would come with its fair share of pain and regret.
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Tags: running away, wreckage
Hey!! Great site! XP
First comment on this entry! Feel so special!
Boy, can you write?! It’s sooooooo good.
Can you teach me to write? Cause you write so good?
To tell the truth, it’s rather sad… o.O
But it’s really well written! XD
Congratulations!!
and i dont get it!
sad but yerh i dont get it..
the world is a better place when you smile nancy
Nanshii has decided to write some fiction!!! Yayy!!! It’s really really really good!
You should definitely expand this, continue it into a full length novel. It would be very interesting plus I would love to read it.
Twila – cool character name. hehehehe
I really wonder what’s going to happen next. Is Twila some sort of wild, amazon girl??? Or maybe she landed on the island a long time ago, also from a plane crash… I hope you keep writing it!
catch 22twoooo.
WRITE MORE FICTION NANSHII OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!!!
You are so good at fiction and you should therefore write more. Please!
Remember – practise makes perfect.
A quote: The difference between fiction and reality is that fiction has to make sense.